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Friday, November 5, 2021

How to make a peanut butter and jelly sandwich

 this week i have been learning how to instruct of making a peanut and jelly sandwich this took 2 days i think to Finnish overall i think this turned out great please comment some things i could do better with this piece of writing


How to Make an Peanut butter and jelly sandwich

Ingredients:

  • Peanut butter

  • Jelly

  • two pieces of breads optional

Equipment:

  • one Butter knife

  • one Plate

  • a lot of motivation


Method

  1. Get your Peanut butter and jellys lid open

  2. Put 2 or 1 piece’s/piece of the bread/breads on the chopping bourd. 

  3. put ¼ of peanut on butter knife

  4. Spread Peanut butter on the bread, with the butter knife.

  5. clean the butter knife

  6. put ¼ of the jelly on to the butter knife

  7. spread the knife on the bread.

  8. Put both of the breads together.

  9. put the sandwich on the plate

  10. LIFT THE SANDWICH AND EAT IT.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, November 2, 2021

Thursday, October 28, 2021

Re-post of FIRST POST!

(Re-post of First post)


Hello my name is

Chakuro

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Lee chin


I love✨anime✨ and  ✨Family✨ (nothing is stronger than ✨Family✨)

And i really hate the subject math and hate Homophobic's

I like cosplaying and The Japanese culture

I really wish to be an artist when i grow up

Multiplication Facts (2s and 3s) Pixel Art


 

Monday, October 18, 2021

Friday, July 9, 2021

weather in Maori

this term we are learning weather in Maori  .We have been using Ki to describe the weather in a place.

look at the pitcher below to see what we have been doing⬇️⬇️⬇️⬇️-_-||

Friday, June 11, 2021

Thursday, May 20, 2021

Moon


 

Friday, May 14, 2021

WW1 diary

 WW1 diary


Tuesday, May 4, 2021

The Earth's Structure

The Earth's Structure sorry for not posting in awhile ^-^
 

Wednesday, March 24, 2021

 Here is my Albatross D.L.O


Friday, March 19, 2021

Music testing sound's with paper

look at my work

(Shy me)


 

Thursday, March 18, 2021

Information report

 check out my information report i worked so hard on this


Monday, March 8, 2021

Blog profile

 


Tuesday, March 2, 2021

south hornby school winds

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heres a link to the other cool blogs you can check out!

https://sites.google.com/southhornby.school.nz/team-raupo-2021/blogs

Friday, February 26, 2021

 All About Me slides enjoy!

Tuesday, February 16, 2021

mihi

 hey this is my mihi hope you like it :)


Zones

 °Hi its been a long time since i posted.Check out my Zones of Regulations,i made check out the other blogs to see lots of creative works that can expire you.Hope you enjoy this i worked so hard.Bai°