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Friday, November 5, 2021

How to make a peanut butter and jelly sandwich

 this week i have been learning how to instruct of making a peanut and jelly sandwich this took 2 days i think to Finnish overall i think this turned out great please comment some things i could do better with this piece of writing


How to Make an Peanut butter and jelly sandwich

Ingredients:

  • Peanut butter

  • Jelly

  • two pieces of breads optional

Equipment:

  • one Butter knife

  • one Plate

  • a lot of motivation


Method

  1. Get your Peanut butter and jellys lid open

  2. Put 2 or 1 piece’s/piece of the bread/breads on the chopping bourd. 

  3. put ¼ of peanut on butter knife

  4. Spread Peanut butter on the bread, with the butter knife.

  5. clean the butter knife

  6. put ¼ of the jelly on to the butter knife

  7. spread the knife on the bread.

  8. Put both of the breads together.

  9. put the sandwich on the plate

  10. LIFT THE SANDWICH AND EAT IT.

Enjoy!

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Tuesday, November 2, 2021